Reviews / Comments

  • Louise says...
    Hi there, great poam!
    about a month ago
  • Ziolko says...
    Replying to ZiolkoOh you wanted rhyming triplets, huh? Yea I'm stumped but maybe you can work with what I wrote?
    about a month ago
  • Ziolko says...
    How about:

    Take your seat below the fleet of stars and enjoy the show;
    your heart will beat with radiant heat and happiness you will know.
    about a month ago
  • Eireann says...
    I Wanted another verse before the end but I've ran out of rhyming triplets that fit the theme. I'd Love to hear any ideas if you have them :)
    about a month ago
  • Eireann says...
    I Wanted another verse before the end but I've ran out of rhyming triplets that fit the theme. I'd Love to hear any ideas if you have them :)
    about a month ago
  • Eireann says...
    I Wanted another verse before the end but I've ran out of rhyming triplets that fit the theme. I'd Love to hear any ideas if you have them :)
    about a month ago
  • Eireann says...
    I Wanted another verse before the end but I've ran out of rhyming triplets that fit the theme. I'd Love to hear any ideas if you have them :)
    about a month ago
  • Eireann says...
    I Wanted another verse before the end but I've ran out of rhyming triplets that fit the theme. I'd Love to hear any ideas if you have them :)
    about a month ago
  • Eireann says...
    I Wanted another verse before the end but I've ran out of rhyming triplets that fit the theme. I'd Love to hear any ideas if you have them :)
    about a month ago
  • Eireann says...
    I Wanted another verse before the end but I've ran out of rhyming triplets that fit the theme. I'd Love to hear any ideas if you have them :)
    about a month ago